girl killing

I think the line art here is terrific. As for the dynamic feel pointed out above, I never was that good at putting an 'in your face' jumping out of the picture look to my stuff. The crit above is well described and probably the only thing I would say to give this more of a punch. I like his expression! That's something I look for in comic art. Nice post

I ask for critiques constantly while posting and re posting 'wips' of my pictures, and shamefully dont get many at all